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#1 Frankt

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Posted 11 April 2018 - 08:36 AM

Trying to learn BW  I thought this might make a good conversion from color. I believe this is in Cade's Cove. if there are any suggestions, please feel free,,,,

 

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Posted 11 April 2018 - 09:24 AM

Very nice.

It looks good as is, I don’t know if I would lighten it a touch, but I am not sure. Might try it only to bring out some more detail. Maybe, increase contrast a touch.
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Posted 11 April 2018 - 10:41 AM

Thought about lightening it a bit, especially the cabin shadows. It seems that the whole dhot is a bit dark in this posting.

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Posted 11 April 2018 - 11:03 AM

Maybe, just a bit more.


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Posted 11 April 2018 - 11:57 AM

Try making just the green lighter.

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Posted 11 April 2018 - 12:10 PM

Nice shot, Frank.

 

I agree with Art on adding more contrast.  :)


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Posted 11 April 2018 - 04:09 PM

Thank you all for your input. I will give it a go

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Posted 11 April 2018 - 06:04 PM

Nice shot. I like the composition. Jeff
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Posted 12 April 2018 - 07:42 AM

Is this an improvement? I want to enter this into my club competition and want it to be right. Thanks for all of your comments.

 

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Posted 13 April 2018 - 12:46 AM

I like it more. It’s dramatic ..... but ...

More chromatic aberration along the roof line. Slightly noticeable in the first image but very pronounced in the second.

Do you have NIK Silver FX?
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Posted 13 April 2018 - 07:44 AM

I like the first better hands-down. Just the right mix. The shadows don't bother me at all. They lend drama.
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Posted 13 April 2018 - 12:38 PM

I like it more. It’s dramatic ..... but ...

More chromatic aberration along the roof line. Slightly noticeable in the first image but very pronounced in the second.

Do you have NIK Silver FX?

 

I agree with Art. 

 

Also, Nik Silver FX is a top notch program.  :)


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Posted 13 April 2018 - 06:24 PM

Oh,my, I did not notice that. I ran it through NIK Silver, but font really have a lot of experience with that. I will go back to the drawing board.

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