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#1 Dennis

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Posted 10 July 2017 - 07:06 PM

I like it, I composed it. But, now, in the computer, it missing something.

 

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Posted 10 July 2017 - 08:04 PM

Hmm it looks good to me, maybe the way the clouds  are not very defined and all to the left but overall it is a wonderful photo.

 

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Posted 10 July 2017 - 09:44 PM

Missing a central focus point.   For me, my eyes want to go to the water but the rocks in front dominate and the trees behind distract.

 

The mountains are nice but hidden behind the trees.

 

Hard to find the central point.


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Posted 11 July 2017 - 02:36 AM

A BIG grizzly bear or cougar!

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Posted 11 July 2017 - 07:49 AM

A BIG grizzly bear or cougar!

Nice image, Dennis.

 

Or an egal or an owls, didn't find them there  :rolleyes:


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Posted 11 July 2017 - 08:15 AM

A differant crop, and color tweaked a bit.

 

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Posted 11 July 2017 - 06:42 PM

It might just be me but it looks like the horizon is tilted a little bit - looks like the water is not level, left side higher than right.



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Posted 11 July 2017 - 11:10 PM

The red kayak is missing. 


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Posted 12 July 2017 - 09:27 AM

Of the two, prefer the second attempt.


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