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#1 Dennis

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Posted 31 December 2017 - 04:10 PM

worked on this for the best part of a week.

 

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Posted 31 December 2017 - 07:22 PM

Looking good!  I like the concept a lot.
If I may make a suggestion though.

Try adding a bit of a white, low opacity wash over the little girl so that she doesn't stand out quite so sharply within the mist that she is in.

I would also use a small blur brush along the edges of the girl to soften her into the background.

It's looking very sweet though.


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Posted 31 December 2017 - 09:47 PM

Thanks Gordon.

 

Her edge is blur, but loses in the reduction to sRGB and jpeg.

 

I did lower the contrast on her, and change the color of the light falling on the goats. I didn't like how the color changed in the first one apon review. Here is the modified one.

 

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 01:54 AM

Much better Dennis.


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