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#1 chaswes5

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Posted 11 December 2017 - 10:41 PM

A waiter from an event I attended last night. This looks too flat.  Any suggestions on how to make it pop?

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Posted 11 December 2017 - 10:49 PM

Nice, Charles.  For my taste, maybe a bit more light, but I like it anyway.


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Posted 12 December 2017 - 08:52 AM

Just a lil lighter as Art suggested.


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Posted 12 December 2017 - 09:11 AM

Also, crop more of the lower body out. Will balance out body size to head size.

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Posted 12 December 2017 - 12:06 PM

Great suggestions from everyone.  Mine would be to increase contrast.  :)


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